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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 9, 2016 18:01:05 GMT agrajag, SACHMATA, and 3 more like this

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Post by kangee on Sept 9, 2016 18:01:05 GMT

I am going to attempt to make a series of playthrough videos of active members recent races. I have talked to Yimello, and have agreed to be the first run. I will make a comments / suggestions post after, and would encourage others to participate. The links to the races are below the video, and also available if you view the video on Youtube.

DNF Driver view of 5 of Yimello's recent races

[015] Children : goo.gl/tUSOrm
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 3.44 miles
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:

Double track and split teams. Advanced stunt race. Jumps, tubes, walldriving, curves and pipes. T20, Zentorno or Osiris recommended. 134 props, 24 cps. LIKE, dislike, BOOKMARK, SHARE!

[016] CTRL : goo.gl/N6R3JJ
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 1.58 miles
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:

Pure driving skill and endurance. No crazy jumps or tubes. Used only stunt raised tracks for road. Test your handling and compete with other players. Use your best car and tyres combo. For best experience turn off catch-up and slipstream. Clean races only please. 1 min 20 sec per lap. 119 props, 18 cps. LIKE, dislike, BOOKMARK, SHARE!

[017] Violet Nights : goo.gl/TuDYPM
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 2.90 miles
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:

Non-Contact pure driving skill and endurance. No crazy jumps or tubes. Used only stunt raised tracks for road. Test your handling and compete with others. Use your best car and tyres combo. For best experience turn off catch-up and slipstream. Clean races only please. 2 min 20 sec per lap. 150 props, 30 cps. LIKE, dislike, BOOKMARK, SHARE!

[018] Believin' : goo.gl/Tf4GmI
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 2.03 miles
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:

Pure driving skill and endurance. No crazy jumps or tubes. Used only stunt raised tracks for road. Test your handling and compete with other players. Use your best car and tyres combo. For best experience turn off catch-up and slipstream. Clean races only please. 1 min 35 sec per lap. 150 props, 18 cps. LIKE, dislike, BOOKMARK, SHARE!

[019] Oi Absinthe: goo.gl/PcSXob
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 4.40 miles
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:

Pure driving and jump skill plus endurance. No crazy props or loops. Test your handling and compete with other players. Use your best car and tyres combo. For best experience turn off catch-up and slipstream. Clean races only please. 3 min 20 sec per lap. 150 props, 30 cps. LIKE, dislike, BOOKMARK, SHARE!

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agrajag
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DNF Driver Views Sept 10, 2016 0:24:46 GMT kangee and Yimello like this

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Post by agrajag on Sept 10, 2016 0:24:46 GMT

Great initiative and I'm sure the creators will appreciate the time put into testing these jobs. I always find watching someone play your job is the best way to spot things to improve as it's very easy to get "creator blindness" on your own races. Looks like a interesting set of jobs from the bits I've seen, hope to see more in this series. Make sure you advertise (ie spam

) this on our social club wall so people know where to get involved.

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 10, 2016 9:48:58 GMT Yimello likes this

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Post by kangee on Sept 10, 2016 9:48:58 GMT

Thanks agrajag - will do.

Anyone who would like me to do a playthrough of some of their races, please post here, or contact me directly.

I apologize for the lateness of the comments, suggestions on the playthrough Yimello, but work and then RL intervened.

There are several things I really enjoyed about your races. You have done an excellent job of using props decoratively to add to the atmosphere. Your use of barriers, especially the tire barriers to create a chicane route worked really well. The race through the High rise section of Los Santos using the buildings themselves as obstacles was great. The glitchy bits through the mountain tunnels was great as well.

Some of the checkpoint placements could be looked at to give better direction and warnings of curves, but there weren't any that I missed, except when I was distracted by the mesmerizing road pattern coming out of one of the mountain tunnels, but that was completely my fault

On the first race the wallride from the tube heading down to the quarter pipe was a bit confusing the first couple of goes (before the video) as to what direction to go, but once I figured it out the whole exchange was very smooth and well done.

I will try to do one of these every week as time permits. I would ask a favor of anyone who has the inclination to do the same for some of my races, as agrajag is quite correct - seeing your race through someone else's eyes can be a great help.

Thanks, and feel free to post your own comments and suggestions as well.

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Yimello
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DNF Driver Views Sept 10, 2016 22:32:27 GMT SACHMATA and kangee like this

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Post by Yimello on Sept 10, 2016 22:32:27 GMT

Improvements, fix suggestions, comments, review:
First of all sorry for my english

Times are video times, not the track/loop times.
Sorry for tearings, next time will rec in fullscreen.

Positive:
+ madness
+ fun
+ competitive for groups
+ surprises
+ variety

Negative:
- maybe some raw props here and there, nothing serious only something for consideration below

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& Down the Rabbit Hole rsg.ms/607c08d
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 3.39 miles
Vehicle Classes: Muscle, Sports, Super
Description:

Follow Alice down the rabbit hole to a fanciful world under the ground. Mind your step, keep to the left and don't rush. If ever you get lost, respawn to get back on track. This is the Red Queen's realm, and she has laid traps for wayward visitors. Choices abound, but is one way better than another. Above you is the real world, below you the abyss. Make your way through and back to the real world above and come again soon. Brakes are NOT optional. Set to Non-contact. 3.5 minute laps.

3:17 not sure if i did just drive too much on the edge but was about to miss cp after loop
3:23 maybe put some ramp in the climb on the 360 loop to make it smoother
3:30 could have some smooth ramp
3:33 was about to drive back to the loop maybe arrow with pointing direction

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@ Half Pipe Heaven II rsg.ms/9f26df8
Players 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 3.71 miles
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:

Super cars meet skateboards. Make your way up the halfpipe ladder to the tubes that take you into the clouds and to a set of 3 nested halfpipes. On these jumps, go down solids, go up stripes, forward flip to limit the distance travelled, backflip to extend the distance. Fly up the waterfall to the top and jump down to the target at the airport or choose the tube down, and have another round. In the tube up spiral yourself from the 3rd boost to the checkpoint for the easiest path.. 6 minute laps

7:14 not sure how to control the car here to get perfect landing but i guess thats the pointing
9:22 showed the alternate route, i guess nthg wrong with it, almost straight tube with rotating things
10:15 would maybe add slow pads or extended the straight to not fly in the curvewall

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Alice's Mad Hatter ][ rsg.ms/6f65a34
Players 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 2.61 miles
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:

Start above the clouds & race thru the bottom of the Mad Hatter's Hat & wallride your way out. Let go the accelerator near the brim & ease over. Take the knuckleduster loop de loops & fly your car down from above the map to the airport below. Hit the 4th loop to line up for the shortcut platform, or make only 3 & take the long way around. BEWARE random manufacturer defects in Rickstar props. Avoid the obstacles on the way back up for another round.. Stock X80, RE-7B, T20, & Zentorno tested.

12:23 that was some op landing from me, tru luck, maybe would add walls aroud the landing place not not fly in the city, but i guess its meant to be like that for hard and fun
12:43 before and after maybe add some ramps or pads on those 360 to make climbing and landing smoother
13:21 cp too close, but i guess no variants here, just need to reverse a bit to get more speed
14:34 showed the track to see alternate path, i guess its for case if player cannot handle loops so can continue race from land if dropped
15:05 maybe add some lil wall in the end of tube to get straight on to the track

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Alice's Mad Hatter ][e rsg.ms/304b45a
Players 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 2.34 miles
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:

Prepare to Die. The Mad Hatter has come down to earth & is angry about it. He left his Hat perched atop the Maze Bank Bldg. Climb the Halfpipe Ladder & enter thru the bottom of his Hat to wallride your way out. Let go the accelerator near the brim & ease over. Travel inside his cane down but beware though as he has it booby trapped. Drive thru Bowling Greens, Ribbon Road & up the twisted Waterfall to the Suicide Spiral. Escape the spiral through a twisted tube & back to the start alive, maybe.

16:47 could not figure to just turn car left/right, my fault
17:33 figured to turn car left/right but overjumping cps a bit
17:44 overjumping cps
17:54 cp did not register when fly thru it, strange, but got it on the ground right after

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Montezuma's CorkscrewBoom rsg.ms/fd3bc58
Players 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 5.18 miles
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:

CUSTOMS OFF - Choose VOLTIC Three of Knott's Berry Farm'c Classic Rollercoasters come to GTA,. Starting with the yellow Montezooma's Revenge. Go through the loop and to the top of the rise, and back down the way you came to a rise on the other side. After climbing the rise and returning, take a hard left to Blue The Corkscrew. Mind your speed when cresting the hills, or go exploring the beautiful countryside surrounding the park. Last go up and back on the purple Boomerang.

23:00 here you used those ramps/pads on the climb thing for 360 loop, thats what i meant upper
23:45 wut
25:01 add 45 degree wall on curve
28:26 maybe slowpad?
PS. In this map I used custom car, thats why I got overfly in some places Did not read description.

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 12, 2016 19:13:12 GMT

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Post by kangee on Sept 12, 2016 19:13:12 GMT

Thank you very much for the playthrough Yimello. I appreciate all your comments and suggestions. I have put some explanation below in Purple.

Sept 10, 2016 22:32:27 GMT Yimello said:

Improvements, fix suggestions, comments, review:
First of all sorry for my english

Times are video times, not the track/loop times.
Sorry for tearings, next time will rec in fullscreen.

Positive:
+ madness
+ fun
+ competitive for groups
+ surprises
+ variety

Negative:
- maybe some raw props here and there, nothing serious only something for consideration below

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& Down the Rabbit Hole rsg.ms/607c08d

3:17 not sure if i did just drive too much on the edge but was about to miss cp after loop
3:23 maybe put some ramp in the climb on the 360 loop to make it smoother
3:30 could have some smooth ramp
3:33 was about to drive back to the loop maybe arrow with pointing direction

This map is prop maxed - both normal and dynamic, under the map, and supposed to be mildly difficult - managable by speed control - for non-stunters. Originally had fewer checkpoints at the loop field part of the map, but saw that more directions were needed. I can add some more checkpoints if needed to clarify, but additional props (including smoothing out the loop prop) means removing a feature. Most of the map was created above ground, put into templates and lowered into place. You can only control world heading angles when placing props in first person so a smooth ramped loop would need to be created above ground and lowered. 150 props is sometimes not enough

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@ Half Pipe Heaven II rsg.ms/9f26df8

7:14 not sure how to control the car here to get perfect landing but i guess thats the pointing
With practice and luck you can land on the target and get the checkpoint (I have done it once) - sometimes just avoiding landing on the buildings is considered a successful landing

9:22 showed the alternate route, i guess nthg wrong with it, almost straight tube with rotating things
The alternate route through the tube is for those who prefer not to fly their car, but it is rather steep and takes about the same time if you don't get hung up on the way down.
10:15 would maybe add slow pads or extended the straight to not fly in the curvewall
Will probably add a slow pad if it works out well.

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Alice's Mad Hatter ][ rsg.ms/6f65a34

12:23 that was some op landing from me, tru luck, maybe would add walls aroud the landing place not not fly in the city, but i guess its meant to be like that for hard and fun

"Let go the accelerator near the brim & ease over." That was a beautiful landing - I was impressed even if it was just luck. It is one of many places on this map that miss it and over you go.

12:43 before and after maybe add some ramps or pads on those 360 to make climbing and landing smoother
13:21 cp too close, but i guess no variants here, just need to reverse a bit to get more speed
14:34 showed the track to see alternate path, i guess its for case if player cannot handle loops so can continue race from land if dropped

This part of the map is very high up, and relies on templates to get the props up here. The top half of the third loop cannot be seen in the creator (thus the low checkpoint, could not get it any higher). Nothing except for part of the base of the 4th loop can be seen in the creator. There is a billboard that you can see when respawning on the 3rd loop pointing to the alternate way down - if you miss it the first time, probably your quickest option in a race. You have to do the first 3 loops for the checkpoints, but the 4th is an optional shortcut, but also the most difficult one.

15:05 maybe add some lil wall in the end of tube to get straight on to the track
It is intended to be one of many places on this map that miss it and over you go.

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Alice's Mad Hatter ][e rsg.ms/304b45a

16:47 could not figure to just turn car left/right, my fault
17:33 figured to turn car left/right but overjumping cps a bit
17:44 overjumping cps
17:54 cp did not register when fly thru it, strange, but got it on the ground right after

This halfpipe ladder (the feature that all your comments are on) is very dependent on speed control, and rolling over after your wheels leave the ceiling. It is forgiving in that you overjump the checkpoints and get back on track, but a smooth line requires letting go of the accelerator just as you are going upside down which is a bit counter-intuitive I realize.
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Montezuma's CorkscrewBoom rsg.ms/fd3bc58

23:00 here you used those ramps/pads on the climb thing for 360 loop, thats what i meant upper
23:45 wut

This checkpoint requires you to go completely to the top of the ramp to get reliably - that is on purpose, although perhaps a bit mean

On the real rollercoaster you would be going up this ramp in reverse - which would be possible except the boost pads don't boost in reverse. Reversing down the two ramps either side of the loop is the best way down if you can manage it.

25:01 add 45 degree wall on curve

Done - thanks.

28:26 maybe slowpad?
PS. In this map I used custom car, thats why I got overfly in some places Did not read description.

Since many people do not read or only glance at the description, I remind people in races I host to read the description, and try to put the critical info right at first. I will try out a slowpad at the point mentioned to see how it works.

Thanks again.

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 22, 2016 0:50:14 GMT

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Post by kangee on Sept 22, 2016 0:50:14 GMT

DNF Driver view of 5 of ArtpokeBR's recent races

¬Art¬ Olympics Rainbow : goo.gl/XPIoCV
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 1.54 miles
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Cycles, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:

A Olympics Color Themed Race =D I Recommend Osiris! , Tyrus Dont Work! , GOOD LUCK

¬Art¬ ¬¹Trophy Truck¹¬ : goo.gl/O0eNx4
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Route Length: 4.31 miles
Vehicle Classes: Off-Road
Description:

An Awesome Off-Road Circuit , Made for an awesome Off-Road Car , Whatch Out for Curves and Jumps! , ONLY WORKS WITH TROPHY TRUCK , GOOOOOOOOOD LUCK

¬Art¬ ¬'whinter Circuit'¬ : goo.gl/YVntpa
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 1.11 miles
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Cycles, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:

GTA MODE FOR THE PITSTOP , this is a nice and awesome F1 inspired Track around the beatiful LS Buildings , Hope you like , check it out my profile for more content , GOOOOOOD LUCK

¬Art¬ They Call you Bacon : goo.gl/ueEhuq
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Route Length: 0.67 miles
Vehicle Classes: Cycles, Super
Description:

Hope you Like spirals ;P , and awesome Old Gen and New gen Sequence of Spirals! , Made for A Trippy Bacon , Hope you like , check it out my profile for more! , AND....... GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD LUCK

¬Art¬ Flashing USA Stunts : goo.gl/GoQ3bi
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Route Length: 3.49 miles
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Cycles, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:

This is my new race using the new features that I Learned , this is not the best race using them , but more races using this features will come soon =D , Hope You Like and..... HAAAAVE FUUUUN

Comments and suggestions:

¬Art¬ Olympics Rainbow :

Good set of stunts - all seemed to transition smoothly from one to the next. The ramp to the wallride at 4:09 is the builtin one on the prop, which seems to cause some people grief (including me at times). A custom ramp like you built for the Trophy truck race might be a better choice, but up to you. Good stunts, nothing to difficult to cause rages - overall a great race.

¬Art¬ ¬¹Trophy Truck¹¬ :

This track shows off well the capabilities of the Trophy Truck as a racing offroad vehicle. It likes to right itself despite the driver

The only thing that I could see to make this race better is to make it laps so could do it all again.

¬Art¬ ¬'whinter Circuit'¬ :

Nice circuit track with good use of the stunt props both for the track and decorations. The only suggestion I have is at the split in the road at 13:16, you might want to consider split checkpoints to show the 2 ways you can go - through the pit stop and on the normal path. You may also want to suggest in the description that smaller cars would be more effective on this track, particularly in a crowded field.

¬Art¬ They Call you Bacon :

Nice stunt race, showcasing old style and new style props. The traffic and the balls, pins, and closed gate at the end make for a bit of randomness to finish off each lap.

¬Art¬ Flashing USA Stunts : goo.gl/GoQ3bi

Great props in this race. The stunts all flow together nicely. You may want to put out some more checkpoints to prevent people bypassing some of the stunts. A checkpoint right at the end of the loop (21:22) would allow a respawn to go on to the next stunt, but make sure the loop was done. The wall attempting to point me in the right direction at 22:03 kept messing with me, but it did give me the opportunity to show the difficulty in keeping people from avoiding the spirals. A well placed advertising wall might do the trick

Thanks ArtpokeBr, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 26, 2016 10:23:18 GMT

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Post by kangee on Sept 26, 2016 10:23:18 GMT

DNF Driver view of 5 of Teltow's recent races

Blind Bends : goo.gl/qzhwJE
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point to Point
Vehicle Classes: Motorcycles
Description:
NON-STUNT race! High speed on and off road twisting roads motorcycle race. Don't bring a Sanchez or likewise!

Backflip : goo.gl/1GwaIY
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Sports, Super
Description:
Fast stunt race. Jumps, threeway part (big badaboom), backflips, wallride (kind of), darkroom loop, more jumps. Glitched RE7B jumps too far..

A Day at the Races (2) : goo.gl/JNTv8a
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:
Regular high speed NON-STUNT race. Supers recommended. GTA for pit stops! Sponsored by Vapid! Vapid Motor Company - For The Win! Buy one, get one for free!

Defying Gravity : goo.gl/zBTb4C
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Sports, Super
Description:
Fast stunt race with flies, hops, jumps and one canonball car flight. Some rather technical areas and a lot pedal to the metal parts. Glitched RE7B jumps way too far.

Banning Burning GP : goo.gl/Pxjq5x
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description: Regular high speed NON-STUNT race. GTA for pits. Sponsored by Globe Oil - if it's greasy, it's Globe Oil! Oil, for a better future, more burning bushes and more religous prophecies!

Comments and Suggestions:

Blind Bends :

A very enjoyable motorbike race. The two trees and the wall were completely my fault. The mix of paved and dirt roads and paths worked well and the transitions between each were smooth. I never felt lost or hunting for the next checkpoint, and definitely no daydreaming while running this route.

Backflip :

A well named stunt race as 2 of the major stunts in the race are best done by backflips. I have driven them in other ways to explore how well other options work. It is well designed to work for both Sports and Super classes, even some of the less powerful sports cars do not have any issues accomplishing the stunts. It is very enjoyable to run, and only have a couple suggestions. The checkpoint at 7:23 is smaller than normal (probably only bothers me) - now that we can insert checkpoints between each other, it would be easy to insert a full size one nearby, delete the small one and move the full size one to the original location. The tube feature at 14:47 doesn't have a checkpoint in it and can be bypassed easily - I would put a checkpoint in the tube (and a secondary on the platform above the tube if you want that to be a valid option) to prevent bypassing the feature all together like I did on the second lap.

A Day at the Races (2) :

A well done road race, using stunt props to guide and enhance the natural road. The couple places that you are driving on stunt track to smooth out the track, or create an overpass to prevent cross traffic did not detract from the feel of the road race. Very effective use of the elevated track to guide the race on the normal road. The tires to reinforce some lampposts preventing them from being breakaway obstacles was effective as well in defining the boundries of the race. The only suggestion I have is to set it to 2 laps by default, it is too enjoyable to only do one.

Defying Gravity :

Interesting stunts combined with a bit of road racing makes this an enjoyable race. Requires more power than Backflip, but nothing too extreme. The primary and secondary checkpoint on the tube/platform at 34:30 is what I would envision for the similar feature in Backflip. The use of blocks to prevent jumping out of the road trench around the base was very effective, dependent on the driver to adjust speed rather than a slowdown strip. Well layed out and interesting race.

Banning Burning GP :

Well done road race with effective use of the track through the viaduct segments and over the harbor. The theme was well done with the regular fire rings culminating in the drive through the burning bush near the end of the lap. May want to default to night to show off the fire, but otherwise no other suggestions. Great race.

Thanks Teltow for agreeing to running your races in this series, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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DNF Driver Views Sept 27, 2016 0:37:36 GMT

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Post by teltow on Sept 27, 2016 0:37:36 GMT

Thanks so much Kangee! What I didn't realize about your video series is how helpful it is for the creator to watch someone else driving you races! It's brilliant, not just to correct mistakes made in the creating process in the actual races shown, but also for future projects. Thanks a lot for all your effort, the nice comments, your time and of course for your thoroughly analysis and well-grounded suggestions.

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Sept 26, 2016 10:23:18 GMT kangee said:

Backflip :
The checkpoint at 7:23 is smaller than normal (probably only bothers me) - now that we can insert checkpoints between each other, it would be easy to insert a full size one nearby, delete the small one and move the full size one to the original location.

The tube feature at 14:47 doesn't have a checkpoint in it and can be bypassed easily - I would put a checkpoint in the tube (and a secondary on the platform above the tube if you want that to be a valid option) to prevent bypassing the feature all together like I did on the second lap.

I'll do both of that. And I wasn't aware there's a workaround for small CPs =)

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Sept 26, 2016 10:23:18 GMT kangee said:

Banning Burning GP :
May want to default to night to show off the fire

I like the lights at night races. But I bump into so many lampposts and the like that I don't set my own races to night =) Especially if it's a GP styled race. It's that bad that because of GTA 5 night races I considered going to an oculist to check out if I'm kind of night-blind =) I have no difficulties in real cars at night, mind you. Defying Gravity would be my no1 choice of my races to set to night. All the lights at Fort Zacundo plus the fire is a nice sight. I think I'll try that =)

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DNF Driver Views Sept 27, 2016 5:25:54 GMT

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Post by HiBerg on Sept 27, 2016 5:25:54 GMT

Sept 27, 2016 0:37:36 GMT teltow said:

I like the lights at night races. But I bump into so many lampposts and the like that I don't set my own races to night =) Especially if it's a GP styled race. It's that bad that because of GTA 5 night races I considered going to an oculist to check out if I'm kind of night-blind =) I have no difficulties in real cars at night, mind you. Defying Gravity would be my no1 choice of my races to set to night. All the lights at Fort Zacundo plus the fire is a nice sight. I think I'll try that =)

Go turn up your brightness setting - That's what I did when I had the same issue.

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DNF Driver Views Sept 27, 2016 22:20:02 GMT

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Post by teltow on Sept 27, 2016 22:20:02 GMT

Sept 27, 2016 5:25:54 GMT HiBerg said:

Go turn up your brightness setting - That's what I did when I had the same issue.

=) I already heard about that ancient method to enhance eye-sight by night... Will I need sunglasses at noon then?

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Sept 27, 2016 22:41:20 GMT

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Post by kangee on Sept 27, 2016 22:41:20 GMT

Sept 27, 2016 22:20:02 GMT teltow said:

Sept 27, 2016 5:25:54 GMT HiBerg said:

Go turn up your brightness setting - That's what I did when I had the same issue.

=) I already heard about that ancient method to enhance eye-sight by night... Will I need sunglasses at noon then?

Yes, or a quick way to change the brightness settings based on whether the game is in night or day

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DNF Driver Views Sept 27, 2016 23:35:52 GMT

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Sept 27, 2016 22:20:02 GMT teltow said:

Sept 27, 2016 5:25:54 GMT HiBerg said:

Go turn up your brightness setting - That's what I did when I had the same issue.

=) I already heard about that ancient method to enhance eye-sight by night... Will I need sunglasses at noon then?

Luckily there is a handy slider that allows you to fine adjust the setting to your liking. No need to turn night into day and day into a fire blaze

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kangee
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DNF Driver Views Oct 3, 2016 9:38:27 GMT

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DNF Driver view of 5 of @alexsniperbullet's recent races

Stunt - The Big One:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description:
Stunt your way through stop signs, jumps and flaming loops. Your target is Maze Bank, The Big One.

Stunt - Deviant Track:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Cycles, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:
A twisted route by the deviant mind. Sustain yourself, do not lose focus or look back. Only the destination is your goal. (Tip 1. Stay on the right before riding the loop, Otherwise you'll crash into other players) (Tip 2. Remember break during the Speedboost & Atomic tire)

Stunt - Forest of Fire:
Players: 1 to 16
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Off-Road
Description:
FIRE! FIRE!! PUT OUT THE FIRE!!! Stunt your way through Paleto Bay's forest wildfire and get wet! Just watch out for those trees! (Trophy Truck recommended!)

Stunt - Quebrado:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Cycles, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs, Utility
Description:
Take on the uneven tracks through out the town and flood control.

Stunt - Roto Track:
Players: 1 to 16
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Off-Road
Description:
All broken and taped up. drive fast as you can in the Trophy Truck before everything falls apart!! it won't hold for long! [Use Trophy Truck only!]

Comments and Suggestions:

Stunt - The Big One:
Nice jumps between tubes and between tubes and track. Good use of alternate paths, and a nice combination of the stop sign and split entrance/exit from loop. Great jump to the finish atop the Maze Bank. You may want to test out the various classes and eliminate any that cannot do all of the stunts in the race to eliminate player frustration if one of those classes is chosen.

Stunt - Deviant Track:
Enjoyable combination of tubes, jumps, and spirals. Great use of the secondary checkpoints for the alternate path throughout the race. You may want to test out the various classes and eliminate any that cannot do all of the stunts in particular the unboosted loop.

Stunt - Forest of Fire:
Great use of the fire rings to simulate a scattered forest fire. Nice mix of natural offroad, built up track, and stunts. At 16:27 you may want to put a directional sign as the path isn't clear where to go from the wall. You may want to consider making the race non-contact as the sluice path (21:40) through the sawmill could become a bottleneck if one of the players gets stuck. The alternate path at 23:15 is great route with additional challenges to avoid the timing of making it through the tube on the shorter path.

Stunt - Quebrado:
Nice integration of stunts into the landscape. Great use of the viaduct / trainyards area. You may want to reposition the checkpoint at 27:12 so a respawn doesn't get you stuck between tirewalls. The respawn at the checkpoint at 34:45 puts you inside the wall, not sure how you can counter that. Another race where you should probably test to make sure which classes are able to complete the race.

Stunt - Roto Track:
The bumpy road track is a great idea. Nice combination of stunts for the Trophy Truck. You may want to consider pre-warning of the wallride at 38:50 so that the vehicle is in position to get on the wall. Overall a good stunt race for the Trophy Truck.

Thanks AlexSniperBullet, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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DNF Driver Views Oct 11, 2016 10:30:51 GMT teltow likes this

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DNF Driver view of 6 of copidet's recent races

Race Info:

LS Speed Track GP v1.2 :
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description:
Non-Contact fast race. On GP style dont expect jumps or pipes! Most of the track have barries on turns, lamp post and trees. Lot of costum and smooth turns to get it faster. Starting on Del Perro high-way to ROCKFORD Plaza and return. hf (ver 1.2 Non-contact)

VINEWOOD RAGE:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Coupes, Muscle, Sports, Sports Classics, Super
Description:
Fast race arround Vinehood hills. No pipes or ramps have been added to this track.

NAILSKIT NEEDED (XL):
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Coupes, Sports, Sports Classics, Super
Description:
Hot circuit arround the hill! ..track props on some turns to make this race even more fast... No stunt hf

COP RUN 2:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Land Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description:
Race dodging police with 4 star wanted level. BULLETPROOF tires is required! (KURUMA) Wanted Level ON updated ver. 1.1

The First Statement:
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Super, SUVs
Description:
(EXTENDED) Long and fast sprint race with high speed turns! Starting in Richman Glen into Arcadius bilding... Suitable with super cars class. Some adjustments still in progress. hf

STADIUM:
Players: 1 to 20
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description:
A mix of street roads and tracks props. ....challenge and tecnical race! Check ur ride and c´mon. no pipes or wallrides. Speed boots rolers makes you use all your skills . Good luck and have fun!

Comments and Suggestions:

LS Speed Track GP v1.2:

Great use of stunt props to frame the raceway and to join natural road paths into a smooth drive. Path was easy to follow.

VINEWOOD RAGE:

Nice built up race track with a well integrated natural road segment. It must be a bug that when a boost pad is in front of a checkpoint that the checkpoint nearly disappears when on the boost pad, then reappears. Does not seem to impact getting the checkpoint though fortunately.

NAILSKIT NEEDED (XL):

Great use of stunt props to enhance the natural roadway into a smooth race. The flaming trees at the end of the lap are very well done. Very enjoyable race.

COP RUN 2:

Great fun race! I died and lost the wanted level, but had I been racing with others I am sure would have gotten it back soon after respawn. Should have respawned when close to death to keep the wanted level going throughout the race. Great fun blowing up the cops!

The First Statement:

Nice combo natural, built up track, and stunt prop enhanced natural race with a few easy jumps to keep things interesting.

STADIUM:

Lots of turns to keep you on your toes. I liked the hidden speed boosts, added an extra element to the track with the unexpected increase in speed all in places with plenty of room to react before the next curve or obstacle. Very enjoyable race.

Thanks copidet, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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teltow Crew Representative +44 Posts: 89	DNF Driver Views Oct 12, 2016 14:38:26 GMT kangee likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teltow on Oct 12, 2016 14:38:26 GMT Good work kangee and excellent races! Watched it on my 40" and the image quality is surprisingly good.
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DNF Driver Views Oct 19, 2016 15:27:21 GMT BestNoob likes this

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DNF Driver view of 5 of BestNoob's recent races

Race Info:

CanalSprint:
Players: 1 to 7
Game Mode: Land Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Coupes, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description: A short Sprint race

BikeTastic:
Players: 1 to 10
Game Mode: Bike Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Motorcycles
Description: Sprint race with nice flow.

Stunts Race Extase:
Players: 1 to 9
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Sports, Super
Description:
I hope that you can handle the power of Stunts. LvL 50+ recommended. Job v1.3.2

Offroad GameZ #1 :
Players: 1 to 8
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Motorcycles, Off-Road
Description:
Mainly its a race but if you want you can freak out take a weapon and free your agressions. Job v1.3

[GZoL] SprintGameZ #2 :
Players: 1 to 16
Game Mode: Land Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Muscle, Sports, Sports Classics, Super, SUVs
Description:
A Sprint-Race in the night through the city streets. You Need for Speed than play GTA Mode thats also available on this fantastic Job. Please give me Feedback .... i dont need feedback because its perfect but if you want you can give. By BestNoob.

Comments and Suggestions:

CanalSprint:

Good race for fulfilling Daily Objectives, nice range of vehicle classes available for variety. This race rewards perfect execution as there is no time to recover from mistakes.

BikeTastic:

Another good race for Daily Objectives. Nice natural path with plenty of obstacles to avoid. Logical placement of checkpoints to assure staying on track.

Stunts Race Extase:

Nice set of stunts melded into a natural land race. Nice implementation of a double loop. Could easily be modified (or copied and modified for a new race) to be a lapped race for those who enjoy longer races.

Offroad GameZ #1 :

Good use of stunt props to spice up a motocross type race. Multiple paths at a number of places to experiment to get quicker routes or avoid congestion with other racers.

[GZoL] SprintGameZ #2 :

Interesting natural track around the northern parts of the city, with a couple alternate paths to choose. An exercise in traffic avoidance with traffic on, would recommend turning off if more than 5 or 6 racers. Checkpoint at 15:43 might be a bit far into the intersection to allow a natural line around the corner. Perhaps move the finish up the road a bit to the start to allow laps (set default laps to 1).

Thanks BestNoob, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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DNF Driver Views Oct 28, 2016 12:06:11 GMT teltow likes this

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DNF Driver view of 5 of Mistral_Heister's recent races

Race Info:

#M8 - Mt Chill Stunt :
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:
Varied stunts track on the Mt chilliad location ! Stay on the road put ur security belt and make ur show !

#M8 - Candy Shore :
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:
Awesome Stunt Track - Hard Difficulty ! Giant Jump, Big looping, Wallride. Come test ur stunter skills on this Candy Shore Race ! OSIRIS - RE7B RECOMMENDED ! B8ST FR on YOUTUBE

#M8 - Legendary Dragon :
Players: 1 to 16
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Sports
Description:
Damn ! Hoe find the seven Crystal Ball's ! Be the first and make ur wish ! Its u, ur car versus the GIANT Dragon ! Stunt is coming ! - Sport Cars only - Work for no custom AND custom - ! NO AIR SUCTION PLEASE !

#M8 - Smoke on the Water :
Players: 1 to 16
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Off-Road
Description:
Offroad stunts race ! Enjoy this paradisiac landscape and test ur skills on this awesome track ! Time to take out your BUGGY RAID - TROPHY TRUCK - BLAZER STREET (Recommended). Go and make ur Show

#M8 - Dragon Road I :
Players: 1 to 30
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Super
Description:
CUNNING STUNTS TUBE - JUMP RACE ! Medium Difficulty. Dont eat before and check ur security belt twice !!

Comments and Suggestions:

#M8 - Mt Chill Stunt:
A great stunt race with a wide variety of features melded into a smooth running race. At 1:30 - I like the use of the 3/4 tube blocks to gradually set you up for the wall ride at the end of the tube. At 1:38 great use of the spiral wall ride to go down instead of up, takes a completely different approach to handle it. On the second lap at 4:22 I flubbed the spiral, but happened to be right over the next checkpoint and was able to recover, skipping the rest of the spiral and the half-pipes. At 2:51 I like the bit of offroad mountain path to give a twist to an otherwise all prop race.

#M8 - Candy Shore:
Another well laid out and interesting stunt race. Nice chicanes to start off the race, setting the tone for the speed control needed throughout the race. At 11:29 - Great dual path quarter pipe features. You might want to custom build the ramp to the wallride at 11:50 to make it more consistent at various speeds. CCC_010 from the PS4 crew has a great explanation here:
the issues with the Rockstar builtin ramps. Nice use of the outside of a tube as the racing path at 14:15.

#M8 - Legendary Dragon:
Great combo stunt race/ street track. The use of dual side by side checkpoints particularly on the street track gives a lot of freedom for picking a line to run. The entrance to the dragon's mouth at 17:17 is well done with the fire and tongue. The occasional stunt integrated into the street track portions were well done and did not feel out of place. The dual path corkscrew pair at 19:48 made the approach to the tube feature aesthetically pleasing. I enjoyed to multiple long jumps leading from the built up stunt features back to the street track.

#M8 - Smoke on the Water:
Good stunt enhanced offroad track. I liked that on the mountain dirt tract that stunt props were used to only give direction and not smooth out the naturally rough track. The stunt portions are well done, well integrated into the track, and add a variety of features to the race.

#M8 - Dragon Road I:
Nicely done tube race with plenty of disconnect jumps between tube sections to keep it challenging. The backflip out of the tube at 39:53 was particularly enjoyable.

Thanks Mistral_Heister, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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DNF Driver Views Nov 1, 2016 15:32:02 GMT kangee likes this

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Hey Kangee!

Was more than happy to select 5 tracks for you, it was a struggle for the 4th and 5th as there are a fair few tracks I'd like to see tried from another perspective.

I managed to narrow it down to five in the end.

socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/pc/jobs/job/4z6AfELnbECkG6bj-Rvb7w (Macca Kart Track I) Short Circuit, lots of laps
advised, Sports is my preference but any class is fun on this
socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/pc/jobs/job/PEAJvU1F5EK7MREFXhvT_w (Three Jumps I) A Sports Stunt Race

socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/pc/jobs/job/pEaUdwa4xEyzcRCC7DxJdQ (Ammo Circuit I) A Sports Race in the City

socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/pc/jobs/job/ZEdwMC_TdUG80rXx93jkFg (Maze Bank Blender III) A Fun Race for 10+ people

socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/pc/jobs/job/v_qrNQjPfESgbykcQQudaA (Cross Country Sweep) An off Road Race, off road Car advised but it is good with other Off Road Classes to

I reckon you will see that my tracks a fairly simple and short. It's my preference I like a little bit of technical stuff and fast laps, I find it is easier for other players to learn the tracks quickly and provide good competition. not to mention the effort required to make big tracks, i'll leave the fancy crazy stuff to the more creative people.

Looking forward to your next videos!

Cheers,

Mac

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DNF Driver Views Nov 3, 2016 10:59:01 GMT VIII_Leo_IIIV and teltow like this

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DNF Driver view of 5 of jarrybro's recent races

Race Info:

Onward To The Skies:
Players: 1 to 10
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sports, Super, SUVs
Description: Take a drive to the skies of Los Santos, via the LS Airport. Catch is with four wheels.

Mountaineers:
Players: 1 to 10
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sports, Super
Description: Grab those bikes, head up into the mountains for a race you'll never forget.

Tubin':
Players: 1 to 14
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Point To Point
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Motorcycles, Muscle, Off-Road, Sports, Super, SUVs
Description: Hit the boardwalk up into a bit of a rough tubing. The stunt cars are on us.

Stunt; Downtown Derby:
Players: 1 to 20
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Compacts, Muscle, Off-Road, Sedans, Sports, Super
Description: It's time to grab those muscle cars and hit the track just above downtown, complete destruction is a constant.

Stunt; Cargo Watchers:
Players: 1 to 14
Game Mode: Stunt Race
Route Type: Laps
Vehicle Classes: Cycles, Motorcycles
Description: Grab those bikes and get flying.

Comments and Suggestions:

Onward To The Skies:
Good selection of classes to choose from. The single extra boosts starting at 1:28 and later only having single boosts is used to good effect, having to choose which boosts to get to make the best time. I like the 3 choices at 2:27, makes that stretch interesting. The alternating slowdown/boost pads with the stop signs starting at 3:11 is well done. The finale starting at 3:43 ends the race on an interesting note.

Mountaineers:
The description calls it a motorbike race, but 6 classes are available, may want to eliminate classes, or just suggest motorbikes. The checkpoint respawn at 6:48 is too close to the hill for a fully upgraded bike to make the jump - perhaps moving the checkpoint further back would help. At 8:17 I missed a checkpoint on the wide raised road by cutting the corner too tight. You can leave it as is and force people to not cut corners or a round checkpoint will cover the wide road so that they can. A good mix of raised track widths, tubes, and obstacles make this race interesting.

Tubin':
Another race with a good selection of classes to choose from. Quick point to point with a good mix of natural road, tubes, and stunt track. The various obstacles including the peds on the pier, and varying track angles made this an enjoyable race.

Stunt; Downtown Derby:
The description calls it a muscle car race, but 6 classes are available, may want to eliminate classes, or just suggest muscle cars. The stop sign boosts combinations are well done and add a great element to the race. The bowling pins hiding explosive barrels at 19:42 is another great feature adding a bit of unpredictability. The no-rails raised track gives this race a high stakes feel.

Stunt; Cargo Watchers:
Nice mix of natural features and stunt props. The ocean waves at a few points make a very effective varying obstacle. A good number of high jumps, and the use of the stunt camera in a couple places were quite enjoyable. Altogether a great motorbike stunt race.

Thanks jarrybro, and everyone else should feel free to post your own comments and suggestions - please keep them constructive. Thanks.

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